Sunday, October 28, 2012

Roseorba's evil queen

       Once there was a happy land called Roseorba, which was run by a queen called Queen Katrina. One day, Katrina was out in the garden, but suddenly she was bitten by a wasp. She fell to the ground immediately.The palace doctors frantically brought her to the Royal hospitals, three towers with many treatment rooms inside. Doctor Patricia found out that the wasp left some venom on Katrina's skin, so Patricia tried to study it. An hour later Patricia turned as pale as a piece of white paper. She found out that the wasp venom was from the  most poisonous, most venomous insect in the city. The venom had the power to turn anybody evil.
       Suddenly, Patricia heard screams from the room that Katrina was in. Then she heard a evil cackle and very loud footsteps. Katrina ran out of the hospital and right into the announcement room. " I vow for everybody  to be bad, bad, bad. No more happiness is allowed! I want lying and theft and sadness! OR ELSE!!!!!" she said it so ferociously that everybody obeyed. From that day on there was bad, bad, bad in every single one of the Roseorbans. Only Katrina was happy.
       One day Patricia could not stand it any more. She ran to the Throne room with a bolt and saw Katrina sipping her wine. Patricia ran and grabbed Katrina's arm and pulled her towards the nearest cabinet, squeezed her in it and bolted it shut. That was the end of Roseoba's evil queen

                                       THE END
 Images from: www.elfwood.com/

1 comment:

  1. Hi Sarah,

    What a great story! Your story writing has come a long way since I was reading it in Grade 1! You have created some really interesting characters in this story.

    Let me know if you would like to share some of your writing with my Grade 2 students. I am sure they would love to hear some of stories.

    Keep up the interesting writing!

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